• Sweetpeaches69@lemmy.world
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    1 year ago

    Personally, I like the third photo the best. There’s a good contrast between the dark, and the light. I do really like the composition, and how one gets the feeling of being in an antique store. Certainly the standout for me.

  • KevinFRK@lemmy.world
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    1 year ago

    Interesting trio.

    The first photo I like - horizontal and vertical lines everywhere and a clear line to the the centre and probably as well lit as possible.

    The second might benefit from boosting the colour in the photo: I’m guessing your memory is of somewhere far more colourful. Other than that, I think the composition in OK.

    The third doesn’t work for me: I’m guessing the concentrated patches of light were what caught your eye, and I think there’s a good photo lurking in there somewhere, but the stair railings and fuzzy foreground stuff are rather distracting.

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      1 year ago

      Thanks for the critique!

      2 tough call, I felt like it gave a flea market feel if I raised the saturation too much, I could have probably played with vibrancy more. Definitely a very desaturated scene in general though

      3 I enjoyed the maximalist quality of everything here, sort of a lost in the crowd feeling

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        1 year ago

        2nd photo - if you experimented with colour, then that’s all I could hope for - it’s your art, after all, not mine!

        3rd photo - fair enough: I could certainly see there was something good there, and it’s not like you could rearrange the shop for a better composition.